Dustin, Your photos are well done individually. I like the interest point of view! However, I lose the flow of the story at the 4th photo. I can't tell what is on the paper at her feet. Then, how does she get the heart back in the last photo?
Hmm... perhaps you should retake the last 2 images.. or you may have to retake them all to get them to flow. Hope you still have the drawings!
Dustin,
ReplyDeleteYour photos are well done individually. I like the interest point of view! However, I lose the flow of the story at the 4th photo. I can't tell what is on the paper at her feet. Then, how does she get the heart back in the last photo?
Hmm... perhaps you should retake the last 2 images.. or you may have to retake them all to get them to flow. Hope you still have the drawings!